Comments on: Herbert the Trillionaire – Chapter 2.03 http://silverpenpub.net/scrivening/herbert-the-trillionaire-chapter-2-03 Technical writing, training, and consultation to help you achieve excellence. Tue, 27 Jul 2010 14:07:01 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Matthew http://silverpenpub.net/scrivening/herbert-the-trillionaire-chapter-2-03/comment-page-1#comment-2719 Matthew Tue, 01 Dec 2009 19:38:05 +0000 http://silverpenpub.net/?p=2421#comment-2719 Man, I'm glad someone likes this thing other than me, lol. I am going to keep going when I'm able, and I enjoy writing the short little things. Feedback like this really helps though. Mystery as an antagonist... interesting idea :-) Anyways, thanks! Man, I’m glad someone likes this thing other than me, lol. I am going to keep going when I’m able, and I enjoy writing the short little things. Feedback like this really helps though.

Mystery as an antagonist… interesting idea :-)

Anyways, thanks!

]]> By: Ryan Burrell http://silverpenpub.net/scrivening/herbert-the-trillionaire-chapter-2-03/comment-page-1#comment-2718 Ryan Burrell Tue, 01 Dec 2009 19:13:36 +0000 http://silverpenpub.net/?p=2421#comment-2718 I haven't wanted to say anything yet so as not to spoil your progress or influence it. I think these have been very good so far. You've built a very likable character in Herbert and are progressing the story nicely. There's an obvious element of mystery involved, doubling as an antagonistic force. Don't get a big head from any of that :) ... just keep chugging along. I'm interested to see where you take this. By far the most interesting of your work that I've read - possibly because of the short episodic format. I haven’t wanted to say anything yet so as not to spoil your progress or influence it. I think these have been very good so far. You’ve built a very likable character in Herbert and are progressing the story nicely. There’s an obvious element of mystery involved, doubling as an antagonistic force.

Don’t get a big head from any of that :) … just keep chugging along. I’m interested to see where you take this. By far the most interesting of your work that I’ve read – possibly because of the short episodic format.

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